China is already ahead in the game. Perhaps it is more a question of how badly does China really want to embarrass any nation that sends it hundreds of billions of dollars every year? Unless the dollar completely shrivels up, I think China will want to go back to the moon together with its indebted partner. In fact for several hundred billion dollars a year, if I were China I would insist the Americans step foot first off of the Shenzhou back upon the moon’s surface. It is such a small price to pay to be humble.

If you have the time, I would greatly appreciate any rewrite suggestions you might have. To me the message is more important than the writing style. I would, however, like to make the message as clear and enjoyable to read as possible.

If you do have the time, and are interested in suggesting edits, supporting documentation and background information can be found at

http://www.BradBlog.com/ClintCurtisSummary.htm
http://www.BradBlog.com/ClintCurtis.htm
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clint_Curtis

Thanks,

Clint

Anyway, you don’t have to apologize to me for your grammar. I’m not in your district, and even if I were, I might vote for you anyway. You might have reason to apologize to yourself, though. You would make a better impression on the college-educated part of your district if you found a good editor. You shouldn’t just fix the run-on sentences and malapropisms. You would do well do organize your message better. Somehow the site rambles; it keeps coming back to corruption allegations against Tom Feeney. You make it seem as if all you really care about is getting even with one personal enemy. Of course, you have to criticize the other guy to win, but you could do it more deftly.

On the other hand, I’ll grant that you have a sense of humor.

Once again I apologize for any errors in English. My Chinese is even worse.